Simone Tells a Story

[pantryslut]

"Once upon a time there was a big spider in the window.
And it climbed off the window and it climbed onto the bookshelf.
And I fell down onto the clouds.*
And I went to bed, and I got a kiss.
And I didn't see any more spiders."


* Me: "You fell, or the spider fell?
Simone: "No, I fell."
Me: "You fell to the ground?"
Simone: "No, clouds."

Comments

[lavendertook.livejournal.com]

That is a great story!!! (-:

[jactitation.livejournal.com]

Exciting beginning, narrative arc, and unexpected ending: what more could you want from a first story?